I really like what you have written. This probably won't be your thing, but these are the kind of writing prompts we use in our creative writing pieces at Uni.
* Soundscapes - i.e. clattering, squeaking, crunching, trickling wind banging doors and windows. Rustling of animals foraging through rubbish bags. Contrast this with the silence.
Maybe a broken child's toy that plays a fractured melody <--- symbolic of a time where things were ok.
* Smells - apart from body decay i.e. grit, diesel, candle wax, blood, tar, rust, mushroom smell of damp, rotting food etc.
* Sense of Place
Places of Worship - Churches/Temples/Sanctuaries/Stone Circles/Wells
Municipal places - schools/offices/hospitals, esp.lunatic asylums
Derelict shopping precincts/casinos/cinemas/fairgrounds etc.
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* Soundscapes - i.e. clattering, squeaking, crunching, trickling wind banging doors and windows. Rustling of animals foraging through rubbish bags. Contrast this with the silence.
Maybe a broken child's toy that plays a fractured melody <--- symbolic of a time where things were ok.
* Smells - apart from body decay i.e. grit, diesel, candle wax, blood, tar, rust, mushroom smell of damp, rotting food etc.
* Sense of Place
Places of Worship - Churches/Temples/Sanctuaries/Stone Circles/Wells
Municipal places - schools/offices/hospitals, esp.lunatic asylums
Derelict shopping precincts/casinos/cinemas/fairgrounds etc.
* Props
keys/boxes/tarot/knives/talismans/candles
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Might be an idea you look at the LJ site 'Abandoned Places' to help you. There is a guy on there who does really lovely film work
Antiquity Echoes - https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CgC5SBby140
Hope this maybe some help :-)